Snappy Poker

In marketing circles, it’s well-known that an ad has about nine seconds to grab a
reader’s attention. Nine seconds. That’s not much time. Unfortunately, it’s
probably the same amount of time your story or article has to draw your reader in.
That’s why an effective lead is a must-have for every piece of writing.

In case you don’t have a journalism background, when I say lead, I mean the
opening paragraph or two. That small bit of text is what has to grab your reader and
keep them readingin just nine seconds. I also want to start with a warning. Not
every type of lead will fit every type of story. Part of being a savvy writer is knowing
when to use a certain technique. I won’t go over all the types of leads hereyou can
learn them in many journalism classes and booksbut I will highlight some general
types of leads and how to use them.

First, many leads use description to draw readers in. If your subject has a scene,
setting or event that’s especially colorful, description might be the technique for
you. You might think descriptive leads only work for fiction, but that’s not the case.
A good description can make a feature story come alive. For example, here’s a lead I
used in a local business profile:

Picture yourself kayaking through the stillness of the Back Bay waters. You’re in
the kayak with a coworker you’ve never talked to before today, and the two of you
are paddling in perfect tandem. A river otter swims up next to your kayak. In the
distance you see a bald eagle circle over the water.

The idea is to create a mood, or feeling, as the reader pictures the scene in his
mind.

Second, many leads start with a quote. This is a great way to jump right into the
action. It brings up questions about who’s speaking, whom they’re speaking to, and
what they’re talking about. For example, a story about a young boy’s adventures
may start with:

“They say Old Man Jenkins still haunts this old graveyard.”

That phrase opens up all kinds of possibilities. A news story, on the other hand,
would begin with a powerful quote from a main news source.

Finally, you can sometimes start stories with a question. Use this technique
sparingly; many writers consider it a lazy way out. In a way, it is. It’s usually the
easiest method, especially in nonfiction. That’s why you need to avoid it! However,
there are times when a question really is the best lead-in to your writing. Also, it’s a
great cop-out when you’re beating your head against a wall because you can’t find
the right lead for your story.

These are only three of many techniques, but they should help you get started, both
in your writing and in stopping your elusive readers in their tracks.

Andrea’s writing background includes features, editorials, reviews, profiles,
poetry and fiction. She has published several freelance pieces over the past several
years, and was the winner of the MOTA short story contest in 2002. She also
received honorable mentions for fiction from Writer’s Journal magazine in
2002 and 2004. She’s currently working on several fiction projects in her spare
time. Visit her blog at http://www.creativewithwriting.blogspot.com.